Jasmin

Tuesday, July 18, 2006

"A bag full of dreams"

I knew a sweet little girl
Who had a bag on her shoulder
She often opened and closed the bag
"It was a bag full of dreams" as she referred

She was the only child of her parents
They loved and nurtured her dreams to the fullest
She grew up to a beautiful young lady,
Who still had the bag on her shoulder

She met a smart handsome man
Who also had a bag full of dreams
"They would be best couple ever"
Poeple said as they came across

But as the time played its roll,
The bittter truth strikes them hard
Their dreams were never the same,
But they had a life to live along

But as the saying goes,
"Life is short and live it to the fullest"
Now I see happy couple having arms around,
Struggling togehter hard ,to build on their dream.

10 Comments:

  • Excellent. Good one.

    This happens with most of us. Fate is something which is above and beyond our dreams. Still, I hope you are not talking about youself here ;)

    Good writeups. Keep on writing.

    By Blogger ശ്രീജിത്ത്‌ കെ, at 4:04 AM  

  • we all keep frozen cemeteries in our mind. with calm dead dreams and hopes. sleep in the calm nites and morrows. no one to disturb, no one to make them awaken.

    one day they will get awkened from the silence. memories of a clenched soul.

    By Blogger riz, at 1:20 AM  

  • മുല്ലപ്പൂവെ,
    ഈ തിരിച്ചറിവിനെയാണ്‌ ബോധോദയം എന്നുപോലും പറയുന്നത്‌. യദാര്‍ത്ഥ്യബോധത്തോളം ശക്തമായ അടിത്തര വേറെയില്ല. പഴകിയ സ്വപ്നസഞ്ചികള്‍ വലിച്ചെറിയുക !!!

    By Blogger chithrakaranചിത്രകാരന്‍, at 10:27 PM  

  • Idea of the poem is very familiar. I think somebody has already written a poem like this in English or Malayalam. (Or is it you yourself?)

    All good literature creates such a feeling - something like dejavu...

    This too...

    But, be positive...
    As the mother said, qu sera sera... Whatever will be will be.

    By Blogger കുടുംബംകലക്കി, at 5:31 AM  

  • This was posted by me on a contest in web itself (and was selected for final round :) ) . Donot know whether you are referring to the same.

    Sure to tell u this was written with a positive outlook.

    By Blogger മുല്ലപ്പൂ || Mullappoo, at 5:41 AM  

  • സ്വപ്നങ്ങള്‍ കുത്തി നിരച്ച സഞ്ചി
    ജാസ്മിന്‍ 
    ബ്ലോഗിലെ കവിതയില്‍ 
    കവിതയും ജീവിതവും കണ്ടു
    നല്ലത്

    By Blogger ഉമ്പാച്ചി, at 3:44 AM  

  • Nice one... Best wishes...!!!

    By Blogger Sureshkumar Punjhayil, at 3:46 AM  

  • Great to meet you greet you and read you here

    By Blogger Sapna Anu B.George, at 9:26 PM  

  • Hello Mullapoo...

    gr8 to read abt the bag of dreams..
    a nice one ...
    btw hve u stopped blogging, mashippena is the last ive read from your blog,
    hope to read u more...

    By Blogger Readers Dais, at 6:10 AM  

  • Their dreams were never the same,
    But they had a life to live along

    :)
    keep on writing..nice to read you
    -rocket:D

    By Blogger ലിഡിയ, at 10:21 AM  

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